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Section Two The Introductory Paragraph（第5页）

Third，itisbettertodivideideasintoafesratherthanintomanyspees.Foriherewillbetoomanycategoriesifallpieewsaredividedagtotheirsubjectmatters:eourism，medie，sess，industry，agriculture，edu，sports，etc..Thedivisionisnotlimited.（SeeFigure3.below）

Figure1Indistinct

Figure2Imbalanced

Figure3Limitless

Inagooddivisioegorieswillbedistindlimited.（SeeFigure4.below）

Figure4Good

Practice4-2-5

&hreeessaytopicsbelow.

Topie:Discussthreemajorreasooastudent'sfailuretopassanexam.

Topictwo:Discussthreemajorpressuresthatcollegestudentsarefamodern-daya.

Topicthree:Discussthreemajorpressuresthatemplinmodern-daya.

eoftheessaytopipletethefollo>

Step1.Brainstatherasmanyideasasyouaboutyouressaytopic.

Step2.Divideallyourideasinteneralgroupsandcrossouttheideasthatdonotfitanyofthegroups.

&eanappropriatethesisstatementforthisessaytopimindthatthethreemainpoihesisstatemeicallyparallel.

Ansrovidedonlyforthefirsttopicassuggestions.

3.TheGeements

Thegeemehebadinformationaboutthetopicoftheessay，andtheyareusuallybroadaionalreadyknowhepurposeofthegeementsistoiyourreaderinyourtopidleadsmoothlytoyourthesisstatementwhiewtoyourreader.Thenumberofgeementsyouwriteirraphwilldependonhowlongyourwholeessayis.However，youareexpectedtowriteatleasttweementsinthispart.Thefirstsentenceshouldbeaverygeneralentaboutthetopic.Thesetenceshouldbelessgeneral，andsoon.

&helastgeement，youwritethethesisstatementwhichisusuallythelastseheintrraph.Sofar，thefirstparagraphofaheintrraph-ispleted.

&irraph，keepinmind:

1）Althoughthegeementsusuallyrefertosomegeneralinformatiobenaturallyrelevaopicoftheessay，too.

2）Thegeementsaementshouldbesmoothlyeyainthoughtbetweesshouldbeavoided.

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&hefollowingtwointrraphs.oatedthesisstatement，andthesedhasahesisstatement.

Intrraphone:

Ififteeyyears，putershavebeguntoieveryareaofmodereaedtoseeiheworkplastores，andinsduisnthatputersandputerizedrobotsmaysomedaymakeourhomelifeeasieraing.Ierswilldouaintainafortablee，andmakeavailablegreatamountsofinformation.

Intrraphtwo:

ntowninalmostanylargeAmericity，youelesspeople.Theysitohtheirshoppingcartsfuller（破烂的）belongingsandoftenaskformoheymakeyounervous?Dotheyevehetruthisthatmosthomelesspeopledonotwanttobehomeless，andtheyareafraidofthesamethingsthatyouare.So，homelesspeople，likeeveryoneelse，needbasicallythreethingstofeelsafeintheire.

Bothoftheintrraphsabovearewell-writteeneachparagraphareallrelevaopideaovessmeementstothespecificthesisstatement.Afterreadirraphs，thereadergetaclearideaofwhatwillbediseachoftheessays.

Asyousee，thethesisstatemeopicehavedifferentfuns:thethesisstatemeopicoftheessayasawhole；thetopicestatesthetopigleparagraph.

Tosumup，theintrraphislikeariaop（beginning），graduallynarrowinthemiddle，andverysmallatthebottom（end）.

Practice4-2-6

&hefollowingintrraphs，ineachofwhitenieeachparagraph，beginningwiththemostgeementfirst.Theenthegeheleastgeneral.Finally，putthethesisstatementlast.Ansrovided.

Intrraphone:

（1）Therefore，workaholics'lifestylesaffecttheirfamilies，sociallives，ah.（2）Inaddition，thosewhoarecalledworkaholiotspeimeiies.（3）Nowadays，manymenandwomenworkinlaw，ag，realestate，ahesepeopleareseriousaboutbeiheywhtheweekandeveheyarecalled“workaholics”

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